This is the first and I think only story I'll submit as it's been sitting at my work for a couple of months now and I thought... ah what the hell

I basically wrote this just to pass the time when I was on a business trip one day and I had to wait for clients to arrive. So after I got bored beating the computer at chess, I just started typing away. I don't really take writting all that seriously. How it usually works is I get an idea for a story and then I pitch it to my sister. She writes waaaaayyyy better than I do and she works in the field of literature.

The story was naturally based around the introduction. The resturant where I was waiting for these clients to arrive made the best chicken I ever had (or at least close to it anyway) and I made a bit of a mess on my shirt. So I just went from there. I know not alot of people here will actually take the time to read this but I wanted to show it anyway and hopefully get some feedback and advice aswell.

EDIT

Made the changes like ~teenyxtinyxtina suggested and now is a little more readable.



Also I would like to give a HUGE thanx to her for featuring me on DLD (Daily Literature Deviations). I never ever thought that one of my writings (of all things) would get something like that. Thank you so so so much!